The Party Boys

[Timmycom]

thanks for the absolution tc

the edit you've done so far does add to poem and therefore works, i still think a few things could be done, but understand why you want to touch it as little as possible.

sence is still the wrong spelling )

the friendship that was grown into is evident and hearty.

God damn it! How do you spell sense? My Grammar and spelling has ALWAYS been my weakness. Not that am tranna hide behind it but I have dyspraxia and I have trouble grasping things with order, what am saying is please highlight and help me with this for future reference.