What Elephants Remember fresh*
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Just passing through in my busy days for a fast poetic hit—
The title really drew me in. I was expecting a different voice, strong as an elephant full of emotion and a lot more descriptive; instead I got handed a list. I am disappointed.
Bring out the elephant in you and you will have a killer poem
Perfection changes with the light and light goes on for infinity ~~~Bronte

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What Elephants Remember fresh* - by Philatone - 07-19-2012, 11:55 AM
RE: What Elephants Remember fresh* - by billy - 07-19-2012, 01:33 PM
RE: What Elephants Remember fresh* - by addy - 07-19-2012, 02:29 PM
RE: What Elephants Remember fresh* - by Philatone - 07-20-2012, 09:37 AM
RE: What Elephants Remember fresh* - by Bronte - 07-20-2012, 09:52 AM
RE: What Elephants Remember fresh* - by billy - 07-20-2012, 12:36 PM
RE: What Elephants Remember fresh* - by billy - 07-20-2012, 05:36 PM
RE: What Elephants Remember fresh* - by addy - 07-21-2012, 01:28 PM
RE: What Elephants Remember fresh* - by Philatone - 07-25-2012, 11:51 AM
RE: What Elephants Remember fresh* - by penguin - 07-25-2012, 04:30 PM



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