Overflow
#1
My
chest
ached
a little,
full
of
insomnia
and half spilled
ire -

now it
divides
itself
over
and
over
tumbling

a surging
hydrographic
soliciting to drown
a capsized
lover.

Seething
murmurs
fall
crash
break
dragging the depths

below
my stomach
behind
my colon
reaching
beyond

the
spinning
fiery
wheels

of
sacred
undertow.


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My
chest
ached
a
little
before,
full
of
insomnia
and half spilled
ire -

now it
divides
itself
over
and
over
tumbling

crazy
swift
and
fluid,
like the sea

chasing
after
a
drowned
lover.

Seething
murmurs
fall
crash
break
dragging the depths

below
my stomach
behind
my colon
reaching
beyond

the
spinning
fiery
wheels

of
sacred
undertow
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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Messages In This Thread
Overflow - by Aish - 07-18-2012, 07:28 PM
RE: Overflow - by Universalchild - 07-18-2012, 08:56 PM
RE: Overflow - by Aish - 07-19-2012, 01:46 AM
RE: Overflow - by Philatone - 07-19-2012, 08:45 AM
RE: Overflow - by Aish - 07-19-2012, 08:57 AM
RE: Overflow - by billy - 07-19-2012, 09:50 AM
RE: Overflow - by Todd - 07-23-2012, 08:16 AM
RE: Overflow - by Aish - 07-23-2012, 02:25 PM



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