07-18-2012, 06:05 PM
@billy
I think it is probably alright, for the moment, then. I don't think the lack of punctuation trips people up too much.
Yeah originality is a funny one. Sometimes I think I'm being original but I'm really not, and sometimes I do it without realizing it. Lack of awareness : P Maybe because I don't read enough poetry so don't know what is out there.
@timmy
It's not written in blank verse at all, to my knowledge? If it is, that is accidental.
It is meant to have no structure so I won't be giving one, but I respect that you don't enjoy this sort of thing.
@Paddygirl
Some people do not self harm for attention, they self harm because the pain stimulates them in some way. A scream is a cry for attention, and she wasn't trying to grab attention - if she had done, she might yet have lived. Unfortunately those most at risk are those who slip between the cracks because of their own silence, or the silence of others.
Thanks a lot for your feedback :3
I think it is probably alright, for the moment, then. I don't think the lack of punctuation trips people up too much.
Yeah originality is a funny one. Sometimes I think I'm being original but I'm really not, and sometimes I do it without realizing it. Lack of awareness : P Maybe because I don't read enough poetry so don't know what is out there.
@timmy
It's not written in blank verse at all, to my knowledge? If it is, that is accidental.
It is meant to have no structure so I won't be giving one, but I respect that you don't enjoy this sort of thing.
@Paddygirl
Some people do not self harm for attention, they self harm because the pain stimulates them in some way. A scream is a cry for attention, and she wasn't trying to grab attention - if she had done, she might yet have lived. Unfortunately those most at risk are those who slip between the cracks because of their own silence, or the silence of others.
Thanks a lot for your feedback :3