An attemept at Terza Rima:
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My Best Friend:

A holstered tale between two nervous knees:
O churlish cur, why bite the hand of care?
the lamb was not for eating if you please.

I call you friend and yet those fangs you bare.
We two, we have a shepherd's job to do,
you're not supposed to be a wolf, just glare.

A year to wait til it becomes a ewe
and then we'll strike, but silent with a blade,
or axe, and have more meat to place in stew.

But no you greedy bastard, had you weighed
the situation up you would have heard
a whistle saying how you should have stayed.

Consider this a punishment deferred
and next time know that you shall be interred.

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My Best Friend:

A holstered tale between two nervous knees:
O churlish cur why bite the hand of care?
the lamb was not for eating if you please.

I call you friend and yet those fangs you bare.
You and me, we have a shepherd's job to do,
you're not supposed to be a wolf, just glare.

A year or so when it becomes a ewe
and then we'll strike, but silent with a blade,
or axe, and have more meat to place in stew.

But no you greedy bastard, had you weighed
the situation up you would have heard
a whistle saying how you should have laid.
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An attemept at Terza Rima: - by billy - 07-18-2012, 05:32 PM
RE: An attemept at Terza Rima: - by Leanne - 07-18-2012, 05:50 PM
RE: An attemept at Terza Rima: - by billy - 07-18-2012, 06:02 PM
RE: An attemept at Terza Rima: - by penguin - 07-19-2012, 12:19 AM
RE: An attemept at Terza Rima: - by tectak - 07-19-2012, 05:35 AM
RE: An attemept at Terza Rima: - by billy - 07-19-2012, 09:07 AM
RE: An attemept at Terza Rima: - by Philatone - 07-19-2012, 09:54 AM
RE: An attemept at Terza Rima: - by billy - 07-19-2012, 10:02 AM
RE: An attemept at Terza Rima: - by tectak - 07-24-2012, 06:02 AM



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