Obsession Over If
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I'm just on my way out and can't give this the attention it deserves at the minute, I'll get back to it. First impressions -- love the title, and there are some good lines but I suspect I'll recommend chopping a few out when I return Smile
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Obsession Over If - by arbil_poieo - 07-16-2012, 02:12 PM
RE: Obsession Over If - by Leanne - 07-16-2012, 02:16 PM
RE: Obsession Over If - by tectak - 07-16-2012, 11:42 PM
RE: Obsession Over If - by arbil_poieo - 07-17-2012, 10:09 AM
RE: Obsession Over If - by tectak - 07-17-2012, 04:37 PM
RE: Obsession Over If - by addy - 07-17-2012, 10:21 AM
RE: Obsession Over If - by billy - 07-17-2012, 11:11 AM
RE: Obsession Over If - by arbil_poieo - 07-17-2012, 12:53 PM
RE: Obsession Over If - by addy - 07-17-2012, 02:23 PM
RE: Obsession Over If - by Philatone - 07-19-2012, 08:32 AM
RE: Obsession Over If - by arbil_poieo - 07-19-2012, 02:36 PM



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