Friend or Foe

[billy]

Thank you popeye and Billy, one of the tho's is now removed though in future I will leave the original to show the changes, have seen this in the forums but did not cop to the fact that it is deliberate! The red dust dances, is an image I really like so I might just have to leave that but i do appreciate the feedback.
Leanne, when I spotted L5 missing from the first stanza I double checked the form and saw S2 L3 and am currently looking at changing it...I reckon it could be the harder one to change.
Will check out that tutorial, was mostly reading through poems and just finding my way around. This place is definitely a lot more honest in a very productive way!

i like a woma--- poet who knows what they want for an odd word or piece of grammar being changed it's no biggy. but if it's an odd line then it helps us see the difference. thanks for understanding. i'll probably get detention off leanne for not spotting any missing lines