07-16-2012, 08:43 AM
Thank you popeye and Billy, one of the tho's is now removed 
though in future I will leave the original to show the changes, have seen this in the forums but did not cop to the fact that it is deliberate! The red dust dances, is an image I really like so I might just have to leave that but i do appreciate the feedback.
Leanne, when I spotted L5 missing from the first stanza I double checked the form and saw S2 L3 and am currently looking at changing it...I reckon it could be the harder one to change.
Will check out that tutorial, was mostly reading through poems and just finding my way around. This place is definitely a lot more honest in a very productive way!
though in future I will leave the original to show the changes, have seen this in the forums but did not cop to the fact that it is deliberate! The red dust dances, is an image I really like so I might just have to leave that but i do appreciate the feedback.Leanne, when I spotted L5 missing from the first stanza I double checked the form and saw S2 L3 and am currently looking at changing it...I reckon it could be the harder one to change.
Will check out that tutorial, was mostly reading through poems and just finding my way around. This place is definitely a lot more honest in a very productive way!