07-16-2012, 07:18 AM
Thanks again, Billy. Yeah, the purples must go and the 4th verse mended. I will.
I have to say I have a problem looking at all the different edits of a poem. I'm quite happy for a person to view what I've got now and forget what's gone before. Otherwise, it's too time-consuming, too much like hard work. Philatone's elephant poem is a case in point - too much to wade through.
I have to say I have a problem looking at all the different edits of a poem. I'm quite happy for a person to view what I've got now and forget what's gone before. Otherwise, it's too time-consuming, too much like hard work. Philatone's elephant poem is a case in point - too much to wade through.
Before criticising a person, try walking a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticise them, you're a mile away.....and you have their shoes.