07-16-2012, 06:34 AM
Could be lacking a line in the 1 st stanza also! Only spotted...may help when I look at tenses, so just a quick fix...I hate apostrophes...before the s, after the s, leave it out except for these circumstances 
still you went easy, lulling me into a false sense of security eh. Yep, spot on, Toowoomba floods it is. 5.30am is too early for anything!
still you went easy, lulling me into a false sense of security eh. Yep, spot on, Toowoomba floods it is. 5.30am is too early for anything!