07-16-2012, 04:47 AM
Nice edit indeed!
L3 is still missing a foot (maybe those dogs gnawed it off); what about:
The dogs, asleep in hessian walls or prowling through the alleyways OR The dogs, asleep in hessian walls or prowling frozen alleyways
Something like that?
L3 is still missing a foot (maybe those dogs gnawed it off); what about:
The dogs, asleep in hessian walls or prowling through the alleyways OR The dogs, asleep in hessian walls or prowling frozen alleyways
Something like that?
It could be worse