What Elephants Remember

[Philatone]

dale, ray, todd, universal, tec, and all who have helped


I've appreciated your feedback and help with this. I've decided to take the piece in a new direction; currently, it strikes me as focusing on details that it shouldn't be, and it also feels more detached, to me, than I would like. I hope to have a rather dramatically different version up soon--guidance with that would be appreciated. I hope the new direction takes the piece towards the potential I think it has

thanks for your help with everything