alone

[arbil_poieo]

This is a great start. I would of liked more conflict, maybe interact more with yourself and the background, which would have probably helped the reader to feel the poem and not just read it. I do like this poem because it is relatable, who doesn't feel alone at times. I just didn't feel that spark or connection to it. I liked the second stanza, that felt original to me and made that specific moment of going into a room while everyone else leaves realistic...very spot on. All in all it was a good read.