07-13-2012, 04:38 AM
It is interesting, although I found some parts confusing as to who was being spoken of. I'm not sure of the first stanza and what it's purpose is other than allowing you to use the first line of the second stanza. Is the first stanza suppose to be about the co-worker who commits suicide?
Dale
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.