07-12-2012, 11:08 AM
"The dogs, asleep in hessian walls or curled in stone stairways, -- the rhyme bothers me here -- the accent doesn't fall on "ways" naturally, so to make it work I have to pronounce this awkwardly. It's also a foot short to my ear."
Suggestion
Dogs sleep between hessian walls or curl up in the stone stairways,
Dale
Suggestion
Dogs sleep between hessian walls or curl up in the stone stairways,
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.