Revelation
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tectak

Glad to give you paper for the head.
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Leanne,

I've gone back and forth on that one myself. When I add it in there seems as if there is too many beats. Go figure. I've thought about

"Death’s shadow falls on to me"

I think "upon" puts the accent in the wrong place.

Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Messages In This Thread
Revelation - by Erthona - 05-21-2012, 07:05 PM
RE: Revelation - by tectak - 05-21-2012, 11:55 PM
RE: Revelation - by Erthona - 05-22-2012, 02:32 AM
RE: Revelation - by tectak - 05-22-2012, 03:49 PM
RE: Revelation - by Indie - 05-22-2012, 08:07 AM
RE: Revelation - by Erthona - 05-22-2012, 09:52 AM
RE: Revelation - by billy - 05-22-2012, 10:28 AM
RE: Revelation - by Erthona - 05-22-2012, 11:13 PM
RE: Revelation - by addy - 05-23-2012, 10:12 AM
RE: Revelation - by Leanne - 05-27-2012, 05:28 AM
RE: Revelation - by Arachne - 05-30-2012, 02:52 AM
RE: Revelation - by Erthona - 05-30-2012, 08:28 AM
RE: Revelation - by Erthona - 07-12-2012, 01:31 AM
RE: Revelation - by tectak - 07-12-2012, 04:27 AM
RE: Revelation - by Leanne - 07-12-2012, 04:33 AM
RE: Revelation - by Erthona - 07-12-2012, 11:00 AM



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