07-10-2012, 07:11 PM
(07-08-2012, 05:38 AM)penguin Wrote: Thanks, Phaedra. I decided to give the poem its original title back and stop trying to be clever. Double Jeopardy - in legal terms I think it means that you can't be tried for the same offence twice. But the poem is meant to be about a relationship gone stale in which one partner puts the other through the mill repeatedly for past offences. The averted cheek has been struck, I'm trying for a heated resentment.Ah, okay, that does make sense.
The poem sprang from an exercise I give myself some times - to try and convert, condense a passage or chapter from a novel into a poem!
Best Wishes, Ray
I think I took it too literally, I thought it was about domestic violence. Thanks for the read!

