The Unspeakably Familiar
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(07-08-2012, 05:38 AM)penguin Wrote:  Thanks, Phaedra. I decided to give the poem its original title back and stop trying to be clever. Double Jeopardy - in legal terms I think it means that you can't be tried for the same offence twice. But the poem is meant to be about a relationship gone stale in which one partner puts the other through the mill repeatedly for past offences. The averted cheek has been struck, I'm trying for a heated resentment.
The poem sprang from an exercise I give myself some times - to try and convert, condense a passage or chapter from a novel into a poem!

Best Wishes, Ray
Ah, okay, that does make sense.

I think I took it too literally, I thought it was about domestic violence. Thanks for the read!
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The Unspeakably Familiar - by penguin - 07-07-2012, 05:17 AM
RE: The Unspeakably Familiar - by penguin - 07-08-2012, 05:38 AM
RE: The Unspeakably Familiar - by Universalchild - 07-10-2012, 07:11 PM
RE: The Unspeakably Familiar - by Leanne - 07-08-2012, 06:01 AM
RE: The Unspeakably Familiar - by billy - 07-08-2012, 07:46 AM
RE: The Unspeakably Familiar - by Erthona - 07-08-2012, 05:49 PM
RE: The Unspeakably Familiar - by penguin - 07-08-2012, 06:07 PM
RE: The Unspeakably Familiar - by Erthona - 07-08-2012, 07:32 PM
RE: The Unspeakably Familiar - by tectak - 07-08-2012, 10:49 PM
RE: The Unspeakably Familiar - by penguin - 07-09-2012, 05:36 AM
RE: The Unspeakably Familiar - by tectak - 07-09-2012, 05:46 PM
RE: The Unspeakably Familiar - by Philatone - 07-09-2012, 07:31 AM
RE: The Unspeakably Familiar - by Leanne - 07-09-2012, 08:07 AM
RE: The Unspeakably Familiar - by billy - 07-09-2012, 11:21 AM
RE: The Unspeakably Familiar - by penguin - 07-10-2012, 06:42 AM



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