07-10-2012, 06:42 AM
Thanks all.
Geoff. discolouring chameleon - a bruise forming, yes, but it's also meant to imply the revealing of one's true colours
"....not sure how I feel about the transition from stanza to stanza"
nor me, originally there were just 16 lines, no stanzas.
Leanne. You must have a really powerful version of Google Maps.
Billy. I can see why you got to where you got.
Tectak. You read this on Poets' Graves, then? Ooooh, feels a bit like being stalked. First Kate Moss, now....
I revisited the post today myself. So
language learnt to clutch and curve him
clear of sideways currency
As clear as mud.
Geoff. discolouring chameleon - a bruise forming, yes, but it's also meant to imply the revealing of one's true colours
"....not sure how I feel about the transition from stanza to stanza"
nor me, originally there were just 16 lines, no stanzas.
Leanne. You must have a really powerful version of Google Maps.
Billy. I can see why you got to where you got.
Tectak. You read this on Poets' Graves, then? Ooooh, feels a bit like being stalked. First Kate Moss, now....
I revisited the post today myself. So
language learnt to clutch and curve him
clear of sideways currency
As clear as mud.
Before criticising a person, try walking a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticise them, you're a mile away.....and you have their shoes.