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What Elephants Remember

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07-09-2012, 11:53 PM

(07-09-2012, 12:33 PM)Philatone Wrote: billy
think the l's in "chiselled" is an American vs. British thing

going to take a look and make adjustments, especially regarding the last stanza; thanks for the time!

Hi phil,
I have given this a read and feel that your first service was fast but out of court!
I think your second serve will be more controlled and cautious so I am going to try a return once you lob it my way. Big Grin

Big Grin

Best,
tectak

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What Elephants Remember - by Philatone - 07-09-2012, 09:15 AM

RE: What Elephants Remember - by billy - 07-09-2012, 11:05 AM

RE: What Elephants Remember - by Philatone - 07-09-2012, 12:33 PM

RE: What Elephants Remember - by tectak - 07-09-2012, 11:53 PM

RE: What Elephants Remember - by billy - 07-09-2012, 12:45 PM

RE: What Elephants Remember - by addy - 07-09-2012, 01:07 PM

RE: What Elephants Remember - by Indie - 07-09-2012, 02:26 PM

RE: What Elephants Remember - by billy - 07-09-2012, 05:14 PM

RE: What Elephants Remember - by penguin - 07-10-2012, 07:09 AM

RE: What Elephants Remember - by Todd - 07-10-2012, 11:29 AM

RE: What Elephants Remember - by Philatone - 07-10-2012, 01:31 PM

RE: What Elephants Remember - by tectak - 07-10-2012, 06:36 PM

RE: What Elephants Remember - by Universalchild - 07-10-2012, 07:18 PM

RE: What Elephants Remember - by Todd - 07-10-2012, 08:00 PM

RE: What Elephants Remember - by penguin - 07-11-2012, 08:27 PM

RE: What Elephants Remember - by Erthona - 07-12-2012, 02:17 AM

RE: What Elephants Remember - by Philatone - 07-13-2012, 11:02 AM

RE: What Elephants Remember - by billy - 07-13-2012, 11:26 AM

RE: What Elephants Remember - by Philatone - 07-14-2012, 04:18 AM

RE: What Elephants Remember - by Leanne - 07-14-2012, 04:39 AM

RE: What Elephants Remember - by don miguel - 07-15-2012, 09:52 PM

RE: What Elephants Remember - by Todd - 07-15-2012, 11:03 PM

RE: What Elephants Remember - by Philatone - 07-16-2012, 03:35 AM

RE: What Elephants Remember - by Philatone - 07-19-2012, 09:43 AM

RE: What Elephants Remember - by billy - 07-19-2012, 10:31 AM

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