07-09-2012, 11:53 PM
(07-09-2012, 12:33 PM)Philatone Wrote: billyHi phil,
think the l's in "chiselled" is an American vs. British thing
going to take a look and make adjustments, especially regarding the last stanza; thanks for the time!
I have given this a read and feel that your first service was fast but out of court!
I think your second serve will be more controlled and cautious so I am going to try a return once you lob it my way.

Best,
tectak

