07-08-2012, 09:54 PM
I see your point, but this is meant to be a cynical voice who is partly parodying an advertisement of a seaside holiday, like the kind given in the early ninteenhundreds. It is also set in the future, an assumed future where pollution is worse. Also, plastic really is grounded down and dumped in the sea, I am exagerating real problems. This is pessimistic and definitely not a realistic view on current beaches. My inspiration is dystopia scifi, one of me fave genres. I know that sort of thing isn't everybodies cup of tea though. Thanks a lot for the feedback xxx

