The Unspeakably Familiar
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(07-07-2012, 05:17 AM)penguin Wrote:  Early twilight frost hardening
plangent to imperative; First time in a while that I've had to look up a word. I don't really like the sound of it, but it suits perfectly so I can't complain.
language learnt to clutch and curve
him clear of double jeopardy. I'm not sure what this means, but I admit this is likely my lack of knowledge.

Shadow boxers bob and weave,
hide and seek the scripted fall
softened by linoleum;
the sting of an averted cheek
stained a dark and bitter flame Why flame, out of curiosity?
discolouring chameleon.

Boiler bubbles, dripping tap,
carol singers, hiss of gas,
brown sideboard, aspidistra;
squeeze a bauble, tear a picture,
pilfer happy thoughts and crush
the unspeakably familiar. I like the way all of this sounds, it rolls off the tongue well. I understand the last two lines, but I admit I don't get the string of imagery. I thought maybe it was pieces of a picture trying to create a home/something like that.
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The Unspeakably Familiar - by penguin - 07-07-2012, 05:17 AM
RE: Two Falls and a Submission - by Universalchild - 07-07-2012, 06:07 AM
RE: The Unspeakably Familiar - by penguin - 07-08-2012, 05:38 AM
RE: The Unspeakably Familiar - by Universalchild - 07-10-2012, 07:11 PM
RE: The Unspeakably Familiar - by Leanne - 07-08-2012, 06:01 AM
RE: The Unspeakably Familiar - by billy - 07-08-2012, 07:46 AM
RE: The Unspeakably Familiar - by Erthona - 07-08-2012, 05:49 PM
RE: The Unspeakably Familiar - by penguin - 07-08-2012, 06:07 PM
RE: The Unspeakably Familiar - by Erthona - 07-08-2012, 07:32 PM
RE: The Unspeakably Familiar - by tectak - 07-08-2012, 10:49 PM
RE: The Unspeakably Familiar - by penguin - 07-09-2012, 05:36 AM
RE: The Unspeakably Familiar - by tectak - 07-09-2012, 05:46 PM
RE: The Unspeakably Familiar - by Philatone - 07-09-2012, 07:31 AM
RE: The Unspeakably Familiar - by Leanne - 07-09-2012, 08:07 AM
RE: The Unspeakably Familiar - by billy - 07-09-2012, 11:21 AM
RE: The Unspeakably Familiar - by penguin - 07-10-2012, 06:42 AM



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