Mind battle

[Universalchild]

This is the second version of a recent poem I wrote called "Mind Battle", could you assist me in making it better?

Mind Battle

Consciousness, wondering, weaving, dodging in and out, Do you mean wonder or wander? Wandering suits the following words better so I thought I'd check.
Blank featureless faces staring back at me stop to stop, I don't think you need to say blank, featureless tells enough. What does stop to stop mean?
Each and every time surreal, endearing looks fly,
Painful, hateful touches, the fifth sense I know,
Lone paving, the streets deserted, hesitating every other step, Lone paving? Wouldn't lone pavement fit a bit better?
The individual mind of feet and arms.
Down town battlegrounds, soldiers in the horizon, in the rise, Would soliders on the horizon maybe fit better?
Fear like daylight nightmare,
By the mass’s, they come, they storm, I would leave out "By the mass's" personally.
Running, four steps, two,
Shivering spines from left to right,
Two seconds, one.
Yesterday’s blink starts again, chemical hands taking me, What does this bit mean?
Towering skies, colossal,
Time stealing journeys, lucid,
Sand running through the fingers,
Steady ground lifting,
Elevating,
Chaos in bird’s eye,
Synthetic friends guiding through the clouds in my way, eagle to the left.
Ants becoming small, smaller, treading, feeling seems normal.


Recent abstract thoughts remembered, falling,
Grinding down metal bars,
Hemp wrapped,
Ends turning fire red,
Balanced throughout
it will only start again. I like this bit the best.

I have to admit, I really have no idea what is happening in the poem, I'm getting that it is abstract and all in the mind, but I'm still confused haha.