07-05-2012, 06:30 AM
(07-03-2012, 06:55 AM)penguin Wrote: Lily wakes up prematurely
make-up lipstick powder nose
Lily pads and prowls the lounge I like the imagery here, very cat-like
pirouettes expensive toes
Lily looks askance at laundry I don't like askance.
socks and knickers decompose but this line is hilarious!
Lily puts her records on
harmonising talent shows
Lily practises her smile
wearing pantomimic clothes
Lily chats on MSN
emoticonic overdose
Lily taps and points her feet
at the apostolic rows
Lily snaps her fingers- snap!-
the boys adopt a slavish pose
Lily is beside herself
third person singular she goes Haha very good[/b]

