Saudade
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@billy

That is a good idea actually.

@addy

Yeah I think I need a couple more stanzas to stretch it out, I will definitely spend some time working on it. I love the story. I tried to make it obvious that she drowned with the continued mention of rivers.
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Saudade - by Universalchild - 07-01-2012, 01:06 AM
RE: Saudade - by Leanne - 07-01-2012, 05:25 AM
RE: Saudade - by addy - 07-01-2012, 05:39 PM
RE: Saudade - by billy - 07-01-2012, 06:33 PM
RE: Saudade - by Erthona - 07-01-2012, 08:25 PM
RE: Saudade - by Universalchild - 07-03-2012, 05:21 AM
RE: Saudade - by addy - 07-03-2012, 01:43 PM
RE: Saudade - by billy - 07-03-2012, 07:25 AM
RE: Saudade - by Universalchild - 07-03-2012, 11:32 PM
RE: Saudade - by Erthona - 07-04-2012, 12:20 AM



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