07-03-2012, 11:32 PM
@billy
That is a good idea actually.
@addy
Yeah I think I need a couple more stanzas to stretch it out, I will definitely spend some time working on it. I love the story. I tried to make it obvious that she drowned with the continued mention of rivers.
That is a good idea actually.
@addy
Yeah I think I need a couple more stanzas to stretch it out, I will definitely spend some time working on it. I love the story. I tried to make it obvious that she drowned with the continued mention of rivers.

