07-03-2012, 05:54 PM
Just my preference, of course, but I'd rather bugger up the metre than that formulation! Or "The battles will rage on inside you".
I've not heard of Jewel and her ilk. Mind you, I've never met any real poets, either.
I've not heard of Jewel and her ilk. Mind you, I've never met any real poets, either.
Before criticising a person, try walking a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticise them, you're a mile away.....and you have their shoes.