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Model Husband
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07-03-2012, 11:01 AM
a quick note (sorry to drive the talk away from meter for an instant, though I do agree that technically something is a bit off at places), really think you did a good job of holding the stanzas up and keeping the idea flowing. it's an easy form to get repetitive over time, but I think your piece avoids that potential problem well, ensures all of its parts have a purpose, and stays entertaining
Written only for you to consider.
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Model Husband - by penguin - 07-01-2012, 12:15 AM
RE: Model Husband - by Leanne - 07-01-2012, 05:29 AM
RE: Model Husband - by popeye - 07-01-2012, 10:24 AM
RE: Model Husband - by Erthona - 07-01-2012, 04:05 PM
RE: Model Husband - by addy - 07-01-2012, 05:42 PM
RE: Model Husband - by penguin - 07-02-2012, 01:32 AM
RE: Model Husband - by Leanne - 07-02-2012, 05:06 AM
RE: Model Husband - by billy - 07-02-2012, 10:44 AM
RE: Model Husband - by penguin - 07-02-2012, 08:48 PM
RE: Model Husband - by Erthona - 07-02-2012, 11:32 PM
RE: Model Husband - by penguin - 07-03-2012, 01:10 AM
RE: Model Husband - by Leanne - 07-03-2012, 08:24 AM
RE: Model Husband - by Philatone - 07-03-2012, 11:01 AM
RE: Model Husband - by penguin - 07-03-2012, 06:13 PM
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