07-03-2012, 10:12 AM
no nits here, i see tecktak's point about lily pads being a pun and like his work around.
but it is super duper as is.
i would however add an 's' to Lilyism title so that it reads Lilyisms (as it's a group of things and not a belief system)
great fun to read. specially the word play at the end.
but it is super duper as is.
i would however add an 's' to Lilyism title so that it reads Lilyisms (as it's a group of things and not a belief system)
great fun to read. specially the word play at the end.