Lilyism

[tectak]

Lily wakes up prematurely
make-up lipstick powder nose

Lily pads and prowls the lounge unless a pun I would go with prowls and pads
pirouettes expensive toes nice if difficult image. The hell with it. Just nice

Lily looks askance at laundry
socks and knickers decompose

Lily puts her records on
harmonising talent shows

Lily practises her smile
wearing pantomimic clothes

Lily chats on MSN
emoticonic overdose cool modernism. That's how I rock mf

Lily taps and points her feet
at the apostolic rows

Lily snaps her fingers- snap!- maybe clicks her fingers to lose a snap?
the boys adopt a slavish pose

Lily is beside herself
third person singular she goesquite brilliant

Needs nothing doing but doing nothing would not improve it. In spite of my pathetic crit, it is a happy piece: and welcome to it.
best,
tectak