Bethlehem

[tectak]

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I’m scopin’ it outscopin or scooping. Not sure either way, don't know what you're meanin' to say. It don't matter anyway
going ‘round about
up down and then
I’ll becoming inbe coming? This is Sodom, surely
to Bethlehem.

There’s a fire in the sky
that admits no lie
how then to get by
when you wanna be him
in Bethlehem. see end

Can you hear them sing
say they all have wings
it’s the new thing
unless you’ve been
to Bethlehem.

cant help if im modern
so please beg my pardon
or talk to the warden
tell’em I have sinned
with Bethlehem.

©2012 –Erthona

Well, that's a wrap....er...rap. Not really my thing but that said ,it reads well and rocks along nicely. I am not going to embarrass myself in attempting a contextual analysis as I will certainly be wrong. I will say ,though, that it reads like a 70' rock ballad.Am I anywhere near?
Best,
tec[/b]tak