07-03-2012, 07:12 AM
Loved the poetry. Not so sure of the politics - Paris will feed you for free. I hardly think so!
Why not "Your internal battles will rage on"?
I don't really get the first and last verses, though I love the very last line.
The poets write poems of poems - I did notice you had a down on Billy Collins.
Why not "Your internal battles will rage on"?
I don't really get the first and last verses, though I love the very last line.
The poets write poems of poems - I did notice you had a down on Billy Collins.
Before criticising a person, try walking a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticise them, you're a mile away.....and you have their shoes.