Saudade

[billy]

try the [ind] [ind] [ind] ind tags code which lets you tab internal spaces and the    space tags which let you fine tune it. lots of work but it's all we have

Saudade

deep regret

Bones now crushed
into smooth pebbles
progression of nature would natures progression work better?
her flow of tears
en el rio juruena

in the river juruena

eu te amo

I love you

estoy perido

I am lost

The forest always cries
but we must burn her
ancient trees in to capital
o que os olhos não vêem

What the eyes don't see

o coração não sente

the heart doesn't feel

Vibrant flora
flaming birds
become bloodstains
cardinal sins great line in relation to the flaming birds line.
por favor
me perdoe

forgive me, please

She found a crystal
with gold inside
for dreaming
I dream too
sonho impossível

impossible dream

castelo no ar

castle in the air

Our fate in the stars is this line needed, (it feels too cliche)
I am the river
and she a fish
perhaps destined
to lie
forever
e nunca

and ever

en el rio juruena

in the river juruena

a cleave poem of sorts by another name. taking the skewed format into account i really like the way it's done. after reading it a couple of times, i thought it would be great if you could fill in the missing lines with the Portuguese. just an idea. it's a sad but pleasing read.

thanks for showing it to us.