Saudade
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Very experimental... My portugese is a bit weak, I am better with spanish, but the poem is set in Brazil!
For some reason can't fix format, blahh.

Not satisfied with edit yet, will return to later.

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Saudade
deep regret

Bones now crushed
into smooth pebbles
progression of nature
her flow of tears
en el rio juruena
in the river juruena
eu te amo
I love you
estoy perido
I am lost

The forest always cries
but we must burn her
ancient trees into capital
o que os olhos não vêem
What the eyes do not see
o coração não sente
the heart does not feel

Vibrant flora
flaming birds
become bloodstains
cardinal sins
por favor
me perdoe
forgive me, please

She found a crystal
with golden veins
for dreaming
I dream too
sonho impossível
impossible dream
castelo no ar
castle in the air

Fate reflected in constellations
follow the stars
I am the river
the flood
and she the fish
destined to lie
forever
e nunca
and ever
en el rio juruena
in the river juruena
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Messages In This Thread
Saudade - by Universalchild - 07-01-2012, 01:06 AM
RE: Saudade - by Leanne - 07-01-2012, 05:25 AM
RE: Saudade - by addy - 07-01-2012, 05:39 PM
RE: Saudade - by billy - 07-01-2012, 06:33 PM
RE: Saudade - by Erthona - 07-01-2012, 08:25 PM
RE: Saudade - by Universalchild - 07-03-2012, 05:21 AM
RE: Saudade - by addy - 07-03-2012, 01:43 PM
RE: Saudade - by billy - 07-03-2012, 07:25 AM
RE: Saudade - by Universalchild - 07-03-2012, 11:32 PM
RE: Saudade - by Erthona - 07-04-2012, 12:20 AM



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