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Chasing the Dragon
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06-30-2012, 05:01 PM
I remember this. The imagery is really great, just fantastical enough. The last line is a wee bit anticlimactic but not too bad ( "beast set free" i thought was good, but "is dead" sounds like a non-event)
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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Chasing the Dragon - by billy - 12-14-2009, 03:48 PM
RE: Chasing the Dragon - by srijantje - 12-15-2009, 11:17 AM
RE: Chasing the Dragon - by billy - 06-29-2012, 11:32 AM
RE: Chasing the Dragon - by Philatone - 06-30-2012, 12:10 PM
RE: Chasing the Dragon - by billy - 06-30-2012, 04:26 PM
RE: Chasing the Dragon - by addy - 06-30-2012, 05:01 PM
RE: Chasing the Dragon - by billy - 07-01-2012, 06:03 PM
RE: Chasing the Dragon - by Philatone - 06-30-2012, 11:22 PM
RE: Chasing the Dragon - by Universalchild - 07-01-2012, 01:00 AM
RE: Chasing the Dragon - by Erthona - 07-01-2012, 08:08 PM
RE: Chasing the Dragon - by billy - 07-02-2012, 10:14 AM
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