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The Shite That Falls From Clouds.
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06-30-2012, 12:11 AM
The first stanza is excellent, the rest is coattail riding on the first. The muse gave you the first stanza, I guess you thought it wasn't enough and decided to add to it. A shame that.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
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The Shite That Falls From Clouds. - by billy - 06-24-2012, 10:16 AM
RE: The Shite That Falls From Clouds. - by tectak - 06-25-2012, 06:27 AM
RE: The Shite That Falls From Clouds. - by billy - 06-26-2012, 08:45 AM
RE: The Shite That Falls From Clouds. - by Leanne - 06-26-2012, 11:32 AM
RE: The Shite That Falls From Clouds. - by billy - 06-28-2012, 09:03 AM
RE: The Shite That Falls From Clouds. - by billy - 06-29-2012, 04:59 PM
RE: The Shite That Falls From Clouds. - by Philatone - 06-26-2012, 01:15 PM
RE: The Shite That Falls From Clouds. - by billy - 06-26-2012, 01:40 PM
RE: The Shite That Falls From Clouds. - by addy - 06-27-2012, 10:19 AM
RE: The Shite That Falls From Clouds. - by Erthona - 06-30-2012, 12:11 AM
RE: The Shite That Falls From Clouds. - by billy - 06-30-2012, 08:39 AM
RE: The Shite That Falls From Clouds. - by Leanne - 06-30-2012, 08:49 AM
RE: The Shite That Falls From Clouds. - by billy - 06-30-2012, 09:04 AM
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