Just Another Haze
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feedback isn't about conflict UC we give our POV and that's it. unless we miss a fact. describing what something is meant to be is like closing the door after the horse has left the house kind of thing. i used to chase the dragon, it's a factual term given to a factual practice, the metaphorical dragon comes from there being wisps of smoke when you heat the junk on foil over a flame. the chase comes form following the smoking junk as it turns to liquid and smoke and rolls down the foil. it has nothing to do with the high they chase. though i suppose you may mean that in your poem.
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Just Another Haze - by Universalchild - 06-20-2012, 08:55 PM
RE: Just Another Haze - by heslopian - 06-21-2012, 04:52 AM
RE: Just Another Haze - by addy - 06-21-2012, 05:38 AM
RE: Just Another Haze - by Universalchild - 06-21-2012, 05:45 AM
RE: Just Another Haze - by billy - 06-21-2012, 10:58 AM
RE: Just Another Haze - by Universalchild - 06-21-2012, 04:12 PM
RE: Just Another Haze - by billy - 06-21-2012, 05:04 PM
RE: Just Another Haze - by tectak - 06-21-2012, 05:06 PM
RE: Just Another Haze - by penguin - 06-21-2012, 07:29 PM
RE: Just Another Haze - by Universalchild - 06-28-2012, 07:02 PM
RE: Just Another Haze - by tectak - 06-28-2012, 11:35 PM
RE: Just Another Haze - by Universalchild - 06-29-2012, 07:11 AM
RE: Just Another Haze - by tectak - 06-29-2012, 03:56 PM
RE: Just Another Haze - by billy - 06-29-2012, 11:35 AM
RE: Just Another Haze - by Erthona - 06-30-2012, 07:12 AM
RE: Just Another Haze - by Universalchild - 07-03-2012, 04:47 AM
RE: Just Another Haze - by billy - 07-03-2012, 11:17 AM



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