06-25-2012, 06:14 PM
Thank you for your kind and thoughtful critique tectak
Which genre are you are you referring to? I sort of imagined this as a dystopian poem, if there is such a thing.
I wondered about the use of names myself, considering that only Sally has one. I may replace it with something like "the filly", which would tie in with what he calls himself and other family members ("pa", "ma", "lads").
Which genre are you are you referring to? I sort of imagined this as a dystopian poem, if there is such a thing.I wondered about the use of names myself, considering that only Sally has one. I may replace it with something like "the filly", which would tie in with what he calls himself and other family members ("pa", "ma", "lads").
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe