1st edit mainly using Leanne's suggestions.
Nightmare dreams precipitate:
Our thunderous thoughts collected;
and with the waking hours done
in sleep we're resurrected.
Through the maelstrom, run boy run
escape is not a given
once the carousel has spun
we'll certainly be riven.
Split asunder, torn apart
from one horrendous killing;
till anew the next one starts
and blood afresh starts spilling.
A lifetime's skies can't hide us.
We fail; fall into the crowd
hit the pavement with a cuss;
catch our breath
and cry out loud.
i'm rushing this shit so i expect some kind of adverse reaction
Nightmare dreams precipitate:
Our thunderous thoughts collected;
and with the waking hours done
in sleep we're resurrected.
Through the maelstrom, run boy run
escape is not a given
once the carousel has spun
we'll certainly be riven.
Split asunder, torn apart
from one horrendous killing;
till anew the next one starts
and blood afresh starts spilling.
A lifetime's skies can't hide us.
We fail; fall into the crowd
hit the pavement with a cuss;
catch our breath
and cry out loud.
Quote:Original version of:
The Shite That Falls From Clouds.
Nightmare dreams precipitate:
Our thunderous thoughts collected;
and with the waking hours done
in sleep we're resurrected.
Through the maelstrom, run boy run
escape is not a given
once the carousel has spun
we surely will be riven.
Split asunder torn apart
from one horrendous killing;
till anew the next one starts
and blood afresh starts spilling.
A lifetime's skies can't hide us.
We fail; fall into the crowd
hit the pavement with a cuss;
catch our breath and cry out loud.
i'm rushing this shit so i expect some kind of adverse reaction