Still a tear fall

Still a tear fall

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06-24-2012, 09:45 AM

Oop. Again, sorry for overcritiquing Smile

Short version: The imagery you already have is pretty great, use some more in other lines Smile

PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?

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Still a tear fall - by way2epic4me - 06-21-2012, 06:15 PM

RE: Still a tear fall - by ksinll - 06-22-2012, 02:13 AM

RE: Still a tear fall - by addy - 06-22-2012, 10:40 AM

RE: Still a tear fall - by billy - 06-22-2012, 04:37 PM

RE: Still a tear fall - by way2epic4me - 06-22-2012, 10:19 PM

RE: Still a tear fall - by billy - 06-24-2012, 10:19 AM

RE: Still a tear fall - by addy - 06-24-2012, 09:45 AM

RE: Still a tear fall - by way2epic4me - 06-24-2012, 06:39 PM

RE: Still a tear fall - by billy - 06-24-2012, 07:10 PM

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