The Student
#8
This is a really witty and brilliant poem penguin. There's not a shred of critique I can think of to give it. The throwing up her conclusions line was clever, as was the marriage of drinking and studying, and the rhyme worked really well. It's a great joke which reads like clockwork. Thanks very much for the read.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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The Student - by penguin - 06-20-2012, 08:40 PM
RE: The Student - by addy - 06-21-2012, 05:20 AM
RE: The Student - by Universalchild - 06-21-2012, 06:43 AM
RE: The Student - by billy - 06-21-2012, 09:30 AM
RE: The Student - by tectak - 06-21-2012, 03:51 PM
RE: The Student - by penguin - 06-21-2012, 07:42 PM
RE: The Student - by tectak - 06-21-2012, 11:27 PM
RE: The Student - by heslopian - 06-22-2012, 10:37 PM
RE: The Student - by penguin - 06-26-2012, 05:48 AM
RE: The Student - by Leanne - 06-28-2012, 05:47 AM
RE: The Student - by penguin - 06-28-2012, 09:38 PM
RE: The Student - by Erthona - 06-30-2012, 12:05 AM
RE: The Student - by penguin - 06-30-2012, 04:53 AM
RE: The Student - by Erthona - 06-30-2012, 07:26 AM
RE: The Student - by Leanne - 06-30-2012, 07:33 AM
RE: The Student - by penguin - 07-01-2012, 06:21 AM
RE: The Student - by popeye - 07-01-2012, 10:00 AM
RE: The Student - by Erthona - 07-01-2012, 04:12 PM



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