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The Passion of the Wife
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06-22-2012, 05:54 PM
Thanks for the suggestion Bilbo
 I like how definite your alternative is, in that each line makes it clear what's being said and why, if that makes sense.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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The Passion of the Wife - by heslopian - 06-21-2012, 02:38 AM
RE: The Passion of the Wife - by Aish - 06-21-2012, 03:02 AM
RE: The Passion of the Wife - by heslopian - 06-21-2012, 03:52 AM
RE: The Passion of the Wife - by Universalchild - 06-21-2012, 04:14 AM
RE: The Passion of the Wife - by heslopian - 06-21-2012, 04:17 AM
RE: The Passion of the Wife - by Universalchild - 06-21-2012, 04:31 AM
RE: The Passion of the Wife - by heslopian - 06-21-2012, 04:42 AM
RE: The Passion of the Wife - by addy - 06-21-2012, 05:52 AM
RE: The Passion of the Wife - by heslopian - 06-21-2012, 05:56 AM
RE: The Passion of the Wife - by billy - 06-21-2012, 10:33 AM
RE: The Passion of the Wife - by tectak - 06-21-2012, 06:59 PM
RE: The Passion of the Wife - by penguin - 06-22-2012, 12:59 AM
RE: The Passion of the Wife - by heslopian - 06-22-2012, 01:57 AM
RE: The Passion of the Wife - by tectak - 06-22-2012, 08:51 AM
RE: The Passion of the Wife - by billy - 06-22-2012, 05:37 PM
RE: The Passion of the Wife - by heslopian - 06-22-2012, 05:54 PM
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