The Passion of the Wife

[billy]

it's not that bad and i don't think it would take much to sort it out so the tercets stayed.

the reason i said what i did about it. there was notheing after run, were you asking why she didn't run to see what the commotion was, run for help, run from fear. i just felt it was a bit weak compared to the rest of piece,

the 3rd line of the 4th could read something like:

i was to ashamed to explain

why didn't you come to help me?
I couldn't hold a pen all day.
I told the priest it was an accident

just a suggestion of sorts