06-21-2012, 07:42 PM
Thanks all.
The rhymes are meant to be loose, Billy. Very loose!3rd line needs attention, yeah.
Tectak.I thought someone might pick up on reports/measuring. I think "confirming" is a good suggestion, ta. "Drunkenness" it has always been for me.
"A cameo of commitment verse" - I thought I knew what you meant by commitment verse. Now I'm not at all sure.
The rhymes are meant to be loose, Billy. Very loose!3rd line needs attention, yeah.
Tectak.I thought someone might pick up on reports/measuring. I think "confirming" is a good suggestion, ta. "Drunkenness" it has always been for me.
"A cameo of commitment verse" - I thought I knew what you meant by commitment verse. Now I'm not at all sure.
Before criticising a person, try walking a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticise them, you're a mile away.....and you have their shoes.