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The Student
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06-21-2012, 05:20 AM
Wow. Um, this is a pretty darn flawless read for me. My only tiny nit is "reports of some sort" as its puzzlingly vague in an otherwise descriptive poem, but that in no way diminished my enjoyment of the piece. I'm not sure why, but I also really enjoyed the fact that your protagonist is a woman.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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The Student - by penguin - 06-20-2012, 08:40 PM
RE: The Student - by addy - 06-21-2012, 05:20 AM
RE: The Student - by Universalchild - 06-21-2012, 06:43 AM
RE: The Student - by billy - 06-21-2012, 09:30 AM
RE: The Student - by tectak - 06-21-2012, 03:51 PM
RE: The Student - by penguin - 06-21-2012, 07:42 PM
RE: The Student - by tectak - 06-21-2012, 11:27 PM
RE: The Student - by heslopian - 06-22-2012, 10:37 PM
RE: The Student - by penguin - 06-26-2012, 05:48 AM
RE: The Student - by Leanne - 06-28-2012, 05:47 AM
RE: The Student - by penguin - 06-28-2012, 09:38 PM
RE: The Student - by Erthona - 06-30-2012, 12:05 AM
RE: The Student - by penguin - 06-30-2012, 04:53 AM
RE: The Student - by Erthona - 06-30-2012, 07:26 AM
RE: The Student - by Leanne - 06-30-2012, 07:33 AM
RE: The Student - by penguin - 07-01-2012, 06:21 AM
RE: The Student - by popeye - 07-01-2012, 10:00 AM
RE: The Student - by Erthona - 07-01-2012, 04:12 PM
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