The Passion of the Wife

[Universalchild]

Wow, I'm really quite impressed with how powerful and emotive this is then. You've really broken out from yourself with this P.O.V - I know I would struggle to write something like this. It reminds me of "The Handmaid's Tale"

And I also just realized that I was mistaking a comma for a full stop in a couple of places. Sorry I was looking on my phone originally and that is always a bad idea as the text is small and my vision is poor!