06-21-2012, 04:14 AM
I'm not a Christian so I think some of the poem is lost on me, but I still enjoyed it for what it was. I loved the imagery with the eggs and the small doors. I don't really connect or empathize with the woman very well, as I don't view sex in that way, but I can connect with the self-harming aspect and the need to purge through pain.
It does need tidying though, like a few new sentences lack capitals.
It does need tidying though, like a few new sentences lack capitals.