Last Parade (original back at Billy's request)

[Wildcard]

Hi Indie,

I am a huge pothead (or at least I have been for years) and I enjoyed the references in this one as well as the underlying metaphor for personal relationships. I feel quite sure that this could be a really great poem with a little work.

I'm envious of the last stanza as I have always searched for phrasing that equals that and never quite found it in my own brain- while it did seem a little direct at first further reading gave me a sense that there is much more below the surface.

Thanks for sharing. Again :p