06-17-2012, 12:24 PM
I recall commenting on this about the smoking imagery and their relevance (or not) to your main point.. I think you summed it up well... this would work great as a more focused piece, perhaps by splitting it up. It's nice re-reading this piece again; there's a lot to like
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
