sonnet (nearly) on a guilty man waking for phil edit 1 by addy
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(06-16-2012, 07:04 PM)billy Wrote:  whle it flows well it doesn't keep a constant meter. though better than i will scream fuck billy Big Grin (i'm sure they will )
i'd like to know how the poem came about without following the lead given in the poem. it sounds like you could remove is from the last line. i enjoyed it but would enjoy the real scandal more Big Grin
For someone with a degree in scatology your are quite astonishingly perceptiveSmile
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RE: sonnet (nearly) on a guilty man waking for phil - by tectak - 06-16-2012, 11:21 PM



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