06-16-2012, 11:21 PM
(06-16-2012, 07:04 PM)billy Wrote: whle it flows well it doesn't keep a constant meter. though better than i will scream fuck billyFor someone with a degree in scatology your are quite astonishingly perceptive(i'm sure they will )
i'd like to know how the poem came about without following the lead given in the poem. it sounds like you could remove is from the last line. i enjoyed it but would enjoy the real scandal more


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