A Moment of Eternity (Rev. 2 Nov '12)

[billy]

A tickle of raspberry
buds the tongue
delighted senses engage
ulterior motives
lower inhibitions.

Mahogany yangs inside,
outside pallid bubbles is the a comma missing after 'outside'?
ying from a distant room.

Disoriented

pleasantly, burrowed
into filthy cushions,
a drowning dog smiles
soaring-
like an eagle.

i like the opening two lines. the use of buds and tongue are done to perfection. the rest of the 1st stanza feels a bit generic. the ying yang thing equates reasonably well the image of it. the last stanza is great.
what i can't see is the connections to the title (unless it's about a moment of memory)

nothing too shoddy

great to see you do a poem I still have me bloody edit to do

thanks for the read