06-16-2012, 07:04 PM
whle it flows well it doesn't keep a constant meter. though better than i will scream fuck billy 
(i'm sure they will )
i'd like to know how the poem came about without following the lead given in the poem. it sounds like you could remove is from the last line. i enjoyed it but would enjoy the real scandal more
(i'm sure they will )i'd like to know how the poem came about without following the lead given in the poem. it sounds like you could remove is from the last line. i enjoyed it but would enjoy the real scandal more